All Comments on 'Learning the Rules Ch. 04'

Your writing is SO addictive!

Please don't ever stop!

Jen X

That was really, REALLY hot 🥵 ...I hope it's not long to wait til the next part!

100% bookmarking this to enjoy again at a later date... probably more than once!

So it turns out, I'm jealous of Jess even BEFORE she's with Sam! >-<

You write in a very matter of fact style. For instance, Oliver ordered a bottle of Muscadet, salad niçoise and the Poulet aux Porto. Any comment beyond that was merely an appreciation of the pairing and taste. I appreciate your businesslike approach and the plot as well.

Looking forward to the final 7 chapters yet only four more training days. I will finish this series before engaging in the follow on series. No sense in getting ahead of ones self and finding out results before finishing the prequel.

EGRI

I enjoy your writing style.

I like the presentation of submissive training as similar to any other pre-job safety training.

Reading others comments I would say I wish I was Mr. swift. To have a job training all of Crystal’s new hires would be wonderful.

Jen - Thank you, that's so kind of you to say!

Anon - I've hit publish, so shouldn't be long!

KittyKatsKinks - haha! ...enjoy!

pennyrose123 - haha! fair comment!

EGRI - thank you! Mr Swift is a man who knows what he wants, doesn't need a lot of fluff ;)

Thanks so much for reading & commenting!

EG x

So, I did cave and buy this on Amazon - and it was the best 1.99 i've spent in AGES!! But I'm still gonna keep rating you on here so that hopefully more people will see it - because you deserve to get picked up by a publisher (& i really want paperbacks of all your books to read again and again!!) X

---bound, my hard nipples bright red and decorated with tiny gold clamps, flushed with desire and dripping in my Master's come--- SO hot! Loving this story, can't wait for more!

Ahaskin - Thanks so much! And you make a good point!

BrattyBella - You are SO sweet, thank you!!

MastersSmutty Toy - So pleased you're enjoying it! The next part is pending, so I'm at the mercy of Literotica as to when it'll be up, but hopefully not too long!

EG x

This is so good already, and I can tell it's just going to get hotter!

Bring on chapter five! xx

I just absolutely love your writing Eliza!

Even without Sam around, I'm totally invested in Jess!

(Plus it's super hot, obvs!!)

Loving this, so, SO hot!!! X

So into this already - bit sad that it's only novella length, but think I might end up re-reading RAMTBB straight after!

Love the way your stories build - though i definitely want to read all of this in one hit!

To everyone asking where chapter five's at - i hit publish on it a week ago - I'm really sorry it's taking so long, but the process is completely out of my hands once I click submit! (The whole novella *is* available to download on Amazon for £1.99 if you really can't wait though ;)

subbyhunny - I mean, no spoilers, but yeah, it definitely is!

MostlyMaeve - that's so kind of you to say - thank you! (& I'm glad you're invested!)

miss_molly69 - so pleased you're enjoying it!

stephinstoke - ah, thank you!

edgeofglory99 - thank you! (amazon is your friend ;)

Hey Lit Admin!!! What's going on with your publishing? I'm gagging for the next part of this - writer says it's been submitted over a week ago - yet other stories seem to be jumping the queue & getting updated daily? Hardly seems fair!

Give us chapter 5 please!!!

Jen X

*NOT a dig at you Eliza, I know it's out of your hands!*

Jen - I'm really sorry! I don't know why the next part is taking so long to publish - it's never been this long before! I've messaged admin, but as yet had no response - fingers crossed it'll be up soon! EG x