by ElizaGrey
YES! So pleased this is finally up - worth the wait, but really hoping the next part publishes quicker, feel like chapter six is going to be FIRE! 🔥🔥🔥
Jen X
100% worth the wait, but reeeeally hope it's not so long for the next bit, I feel like it's gonna be a gooood one! X
You're right, it's a bit of a tease - but a really really good one! Looking forward to reading what happens next!
Jen - Me too!! Thanks so much for sticking around!
pennyrose123 - thank you!! - and me too!
miss_molly69 - sorry! So glad you liked it though - I feel bad - had no idea I'd be keeping y'all waiting so long for such a quick chapter!!
BUT! I just hit publish on Chapter 6, so keep everything crossed that it'll be up quicker!
Thank you all for reading & commenting!
EG x
Agree with everyone else - totes worth waiting for, but really hope ch.6 will be sooooon!
What good luck to come across this so soon after being posted. On top of that I was pleased to finally read where someone used yellow to slow things down and look for explanation. Such an occurrence in these stories is mostly unheard of. Next on to the show.
Five stars
I agree with EGRI - this has been great so many of these stories border on rape but found yours very respectful
J
stephinstoke - thank you!! Looks like chapter six will be up tomorrow ;)
cmj711 - I'm glad you think so!! Shouldn't be too long :)
EGRI - thank you! And agreed - so often I read Dom's setting out safe words that are never used - just not realistic, especially if a sub is new to the whole thing!
Thank you all so much for reading & commenting!
EG x
You have a real gift. Submission in and of itself is a wonderful gift but to be able to document the power and growth of it so well is truly remarkable and rare even on this site of so many thousand uploads. Thank you for sharing it with us.
Glad I got to this with a few chapters to catch up on - definitely left me wanting more!
Cybersleuth - that's so nice of you to say, thank YOU for such a generous compliment!
edgeofglory99 - thank you! Chapter eight is up now too ;) EG x