All Comments on 'Leela's onetime stand with Rudy'

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Nothing really outstanding.

IndyOnIndyOn5 months ago

Just another unfinished story! *2*

RanDog025RanDog0255 months ago

Dang, I've never seen a score this low. Better read it and find out why! One thing for sure is you either need an editor or you need Text Aloud to write and edit your own material. Second, I don't like one page scripts. Third, I hate cheating of any kind, especially stories. Fourth, it was written like it came from the first experience of a 9th grader on his first date. It wasn't too bad otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

More poorly informed negro twaddle.

26thNC26thNC5 months ago

White trash bitch goes for big black clown as new author joins Buster, GPup, EvilTwin and the rest of the ir fools.

AnonymousAnonymous7 days ago

When trying to write in a language that is not your own, it is better to have an editor and someone to proof read what you write. Otherwise it reads as if a middle school child wrote it.

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