All Comments on 'Left Wanting'

This seemed more like an incest story with the words "mum", "son" and "motherly" but it wouldn't be the first time I misunderstood.

There appeared some uncertainty regarding point of view. Is it first person or third person?

"Side to side she turned my face, his tongue and nose nuzzling those blossoming fleshy petals. They were stiff and hot to the touch and her clit stood out prominently, staring me straight in the eyes. She was so wet in fact that against my movements she squished and Ivan ate her like a ripe mango; no teeth, just my tongue and lips now dripping with her juices.

'Wow,' she cooed, 'I'm forgetting myself here.'

Recapturing eye contact with her, her most loyal customer smiled with just his eyes as I made my tongue into a spear and penetrated her slowly, then curling the tip to stroke upward into her as she whimpered helplessly."