All Comments on 'Legal Heirs Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Meh...

BOOOOOORING... Sorry to say, but this isnt nearly the tops when it comes to your writing... Your short descriptions, and lack of details leave much to the imagination; exactly what *shouldnt* be done with a story of this genre...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
nams

give them names. sis, junior and things like is stupid.

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