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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleabout 2 years ago

This makes ZERO goddamn sense. She treats him like shit and says she loves him? And he’s happy to be treated like a pathetic piece of garbage?

Why? Answer the question why he wants it? Why he gave up everything, including his dignity, because a woman said she loves him. Why she hates him. And its evident she loathes him because no one would ever treat someone they loved with the disdain, contempt and literal antipathy that she demonstrated.

So unless you’re able to answer why he is submitting to an emotional and mental abuse, then i suggest you take the stick you have wedged up your ass and beat yourself until you can. Or you lose consciousness, whichever comes first.

Oh, and i would suggest cleaning your shit off of it, bacterial infection from excrement in an open wound is no laughing matter.

CBruchCBruchabout 2 years agoAuthor

Well, thanks for that incisive critique. I'm sure that other readers will have similarly enjoyed your perceptive remarks. However, it might well be worth pointing out that this story is a fantasy but one based on an exchange I had with a real person who lived the life that is described.

Thanks also for the medical advice but it will not be needed.

Best wishes - Curt

tinytimirelandtinytimirelandabout 2 years ago

Excellent story well developed. Douglas is “reaching for the sky.”

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