All Comments on 'Lending Amanda's Body'

Another great story

Keep writing, and I'll keep giving 5 stars.

excellent

Anonymous:

Thanks for reading and for the five stars.

MaccaDougal:

Thanks for reading. This was immediately review bombed upon publication, so I appreciate the kind words.

I really like this story and it's predecessor. I've just recently gotten into writing mind control stories myself, but these two are very different from the others I've read. The impregnation stuff is a really alluring hook. 5 stars for both stories.

MediocreAuthor:

Thanks for reading and the stars. If you're interested, all my other stories feature impregnation. If you're in the mood for another MC series that's a little darker, try my "System Failure" series.

Fascinating concept and series. I especially enjoy the dream sequences at the end. Hearing Mara's perspective - and even having their joined perspectives - makes a fascinating tale. I also almost feel that even though submerged, the possessed character is aware and emerges. Even with imprinting, in every case, each subject ends up happy. I like that part, too.

Thanks for a couple great tales.

Such a great storyline! Keep going, but every so often he should revisit the birth mothers.

njstumpjumper

Glad you enjoyed it. I'll definitely try to keep the idea of revisiting the mothers in mind. Liz will definitely be making an appearance in a later chapter.

MattKester

Glad you enjoyed it. Part of the distinct flavor I try to bring to MC is that every woman is willing to be impregnated. I find it works much better that way, and it leaves everyone happy.

Where is "Lending Elizabeth's Body" ?

Anonymous

Most of my works were taken down because they were wrongly reported as being written by an AI. I'm still waiting for that one to be put back up, but Laurel has been very slow lately.