Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
PappasleazePappasleaze11 months ago

Not as good as other chapter bur still pretty good. would love to seen a little more dominance being showed somewhere. It did not appear that anyone was actually in charge but all mutually in lust. Thanks for continuing with this series.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Quite good in a raw sort of way, I enjoyed reading it, and although the language was bit strong for me in places, I was in the right mood so I did feel some stirrings in my tummy.

A good story line, the author is definitely developing a style all his own, and I think his literary skills are growing with each story he writes.

I’d also like to see him explore themes other than lesbianism, just to exercise his writing ability, but all in all, a good piece of descriptive work.

Qwer12Qwer1211 months ago

Well done and good entertainment and fun characters. Keep the fun rocking on. Cheers

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous
userNovella23@Novella23
Love lesbian seduction, especially teacher/student. There is nothing like women loving women. The bi and lesbian ladies I have met and chatted with here are, for the most part, very friendly and helpful. Everything I write it is what I fantasize about. Feel free to suggest top...