by Novella23
Not as good as other chapter bur still pretty good. would love to seen a little more dominance being showed somewhere. It did not appear that anyone was actually in charge but all mutually in lust. Thanks for continuing with this series.
Quite good in a raw sort of way, I enjoyed reading it, and although the language was bit strong for me in places, I was in the right mood so I did feel some stirrings in my tummy.
A good story line, the author is definitely developing a style all his own, and I think his literary skills are growing with each story he writes.
I’d also like to see him explore themes other than lesbianism, just to exercise his writing ability, but all in all, a good piece of descriptive work.
Well done and good entertainment and fun characters. Keep the fun rocking on. Cheers