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All Comments on 'Liberated by Jasmine'

by Damian_Black

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 2 years ago

Get out while you can!

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Ocean33Ocean33almost 2 years ago

Great story I hope there is a chapter 2

TheGreyWolf81TheGreyWolf81almost 2 years ago

You can also be too nice in life.

maxx308maxx308almost 2 years ago

It wasn't that bad of a story but please, please proof read before submitting it to Lit.

An editor would help as well.

Damian_BlackDamian_Blackalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for the advice. I did have it proofed but now I'm wond wondering if I submitted the wrong version.

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