All Comments on 'Liberated Pt. 01'

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haltwhogoestherehaltwhogoesthere3 months ago

If the other 49 are as raggedly written, I'm pretty sure I'll go without.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

She's not the only one who needs to process, that was all a bit frantic .

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

that was a bit over the top...like what's even going on... did he fuck his sister when she was asleep and sick or did I read it wrong? If you wanted to portray a stereotype lowlife of a guy, well you have a accomplished that. Not sure what to say about the girl...maybe 'bravo' for arranging all that in one afternoon, seems like she had done it before

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Seems like Erin has a major drug problem.

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