by lickitysplitplus
that was a bit over the top...like what's even going on... did he fuck his sister when she was asleep and sick or did I read it wrong? If you wanted to portray a stereotype lowlife of a guy, well you have a accomplished that. Not sure what to say about the girl...maybe 'bravo' for arranging all that in one afternoon, seems like she had done it before
If the other 49 are as raggedly written, I'm pretty sure I'll go without.