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awyldsideawyldsideabout 3 years ago

I like short stories, but you are not making these long enough to keep our attention. Maybe combine 2 together.

5ubway5ubwayabout 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment. I have done as you suggested and made each part longer.

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Update 09 June 23: Apologies for not writing. Ruth is really having a bad time with the menopause and has not been in the mood to proof read anything we have written. We have written so much that we need to publish, but it is difficult, especially as she has been waiting fo...

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