All Comments on 'Life at Last Ch. 04'

nice story Lance. I'm really enjoying your characters. it's almost like a real event instead of a story. hungrily await the next chapter(s).

Who has time to read stories this long. And, really it wasn't all that great, to begin with.

to the readers who are looking for coninual bdsm, I'm sorry I put the next few chapters in this category and should have indeed entered them in lesbian. The pretext of the story is a woman's journey into the lifestyle and then how her friends get involved as well. I wasn't sure how it should have been posted, but as this was my first attempt at writing an erotic story, I hope you readers can bear with the rest, as there are 12 chapters to it. There are still quite a few more parts of extreme bdsm to come, and hope they satsfy your cravings for bdsm. Thanks to all comments, as it helps me become a better writer.

Brutal but I sooooo enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing Lance.