All Comments on 'Life: Eva Longoria'

You have Eva longoria as your main character and this is all you can come up with?

not a waste, very good detail and that matters alot in an erotic. although he may be right about the plot not having much depth. A vet erotic writer could of done alot more with eva im sure but i thought you made good use of her as a main char esp. for a first story..... definately alot better than my first story i think.

Definitely agree with the negative review.

By the way, what of hers did she want you to take? "Take my" what "now"?