All Comments on 'Life's a Gamble'

Cant wait to read more!!

Cant wait to read more!!

using the standard erotic story black male. If you go for a part two, make sure that there is a realistic response from her husband, family and friends when they discover she is a black cock whore.

White female totally mesmerized by it

IF YOU LIKED IT there are at least a thousand just like in the Lit archives

Would not have bother to read it

He reads to re-live his own self caused misery

being a cheating wife story I would like to read the rest. the part where she is caught and looses everything.

I want to meet the author and give myself to him. Hey guys I am and old fashioned girl who likes nothing better than to be forced by you all. Fab story!!!!

Hey Man; You wrote a very hot story. I know a white woman whos pussy gushed while reading this. Guess its true some women want the big black cocks. Be watching for more. okdeacon

Finish the story. It was great until you stopped. Did your husband find out? Did husband feel how strecthed you pussy is now? Will you give him a creampie unknown to him? Finish the story and your rate will go up.

The guys who write most on this stuff appear to hate women and only get off writing stories of cheating wives who cheat with black studs whose oversize cocks sent them to some miserable heaven

Let's grow up guys

Forget the race element as its just a sick hook. Does this excite you writer as it doesn't 99% of us. Only the jaded weak perverts like humiliation as nothing else gets them excited and off.

Your talent is wasted on such demeaning garbage but it is a choice albeit a self serving sick one.

Get some help little sick one then some self respect.

It never ceases to amaze me how many bigots are attracted to write at this site. This is not even decent porn, let alone erotica. Lazlng's misogyny goes with the territory, but must we give a voice to these racist hatemongerers? Like the nonsensical rape portrayed here, these hate-filled essays have nothing to do with sexual excitement.

but we don't have to rape nobody. We got the white women beggin' for it. They know what good! Don't believe me? Come home from work early some day chumps!

some of us enjoy the fantasy of force at times...Thanks...Jan

Good so far, but you need to finish. In the restaurant, in her home town. What happens? Explain? Also let us know what happens to her? Does she continue with other black men? Do her girlfriends get involved? Some some hints of what could be.

Not a bad story but it needs more action and a climax.

Will wait in the wings for more.

..that this is a racist story...it's a story of a very foolish woman getting herself into a situation with a man who happens to be black...and hung like a horse...and willing to take advantage of her and degrade and humiliate her while fucking her out of her stupid mind...great, loved it,...can't wait to hear how ting-dick white hubby reacts....more asap please

My only complaint is that you drifted off your plotline at the end. Other than that please continue. Also, if you like writing interracial stories as much as I do then you will have to ignore the racists that leave bad ratings and moronic comments.

I especially love the idiot that said this tory was in the wrong catagory. That is a favorite comment of the evangelicals and racists. Another interesting technique is to call you the racist because you wrote a story about a black man and a white woman. Please just take them in stride. They are insecure twits that can't get their own women.