All Comments on 'Life's Little Secrets'

by Sebrena

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John_Henry99John_Henry99almost 14 years ago
Wow

I have a new fantasy. I have to see that. Tell me more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
it's true

it's true pigs can write.

simple49simple49almost 14 years ago
So

it takes a husband to pay for her selfishness. The world still turns, but that does not make her admirable. Just a liar and a cheat.

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpetealmost 14 years ago
I guess if you're wicked or too young....

.....to have a conscience this would titillate but not that erotic, maybe because she narrates like a kid bragging about shoplifting. Well written but a bit trite to be erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
HOT

Keep writing Sabrena. Very good for a first and erotic, stimulating, imaginative, arousing and delightfully vivid story with not too much embellishment.

Don't let these experts screw up your mind or creative thinking...you're very good for a start. 5 Stars!

SehkmaaSehkmaaover 11 years ago
Well done!

Ignore the above comments that do nothing more than show jealousy. You write very well and should most definitely continue.

SharpguySharpguyover 11 years ago
Nicely Written

Bravo. Well done tale reflecting the anticipation and passion of an illicit encounter. I hope there's a chapter two, please.

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
Damn

A cheater is a cheater is a cheater. The author glorifies this tale as if nothing is wrong. All cheaters should die in pain.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
What he doesn't know...

Will eventually kill your marriage, so don't have any children...

And divorcees can screw anyone they want

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

just another slut

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Uninteresting

Just another fuck story. Nothing clever nor original here. A waste of 5 minutes.

jtwheelsjtwheelsover 4 years ago
Not. Just another cheating wife

No worries Just story not very different

26thNC26thNCalmost 2 years ago

Man or woman, she’s a cheating bitch.

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