by Sebrena
it takes a husband to pay for her selfishness. The world still turns, but that does not make her admirable. Just a liar and a cheat.
.....to have a conscience this would titillate but not that erotic, maybe because she narrates like a kid bragging about shoplifting. Well written but a bit trite to be erotic.
Keep writing Sabrena. Very good for a first and erotic, stimulating, imaginative, arousing and delightfully vivid story with not too much embellishment.
Don't let these experts screw up your mind or creative thinking...you're very good for a start. 5 Stars!
Ignore the above comments that do nothing more than show jealousy. You write very well and should most definitely continue.
Bravo. Well done tale reflecting the anticipation and passion of an illicit encounter. I hope there's a chapter two, please.
A cheater is a cheater is a cheater. The author glorifies this tale as if nothing is wrong. All cheaters should die in pain.
Will eventually kill your marriage, so don't have any children...
And divorcees can screw anyone they want
Just another fuck story. Nothing clever nor original here. A waste of 5 minutes.