by Sebrena
Just another fuck story. Nothing clever nor original here. A waste of 5 minutes.
Will eventually kill your marriage, so don't have any children...
And divorcees can screw anyone they want
A cheater is a cheater is a cheater. The author glorifies this tale as if nothing is wrong. All cheaters should die in pain.
Bravo. Well done tale reflecting the anticipation and passion of an illicit encounter. I hope there's a chapter two, please.
Ignore the above comments that do nothing more than show jealousy. You write very well and should most definitely continue.
Keep writing Sabrena. Very good for a first and erotic, stimulating, imaginative, arousing and delightfully vivid story with not too much embellishment.
Don't let these experts screw up your mind or creative thinking...you're very good for a start. 5 Stars!
.....to have a conscience this would titillate but not that erotic, maybe because she narrates like a kid bragging about shoplifting. Well written but a bit trite to be erotic.
it takes a husband to pay for her selfishness. The world still turns, but that does not make her admirable. Just a liar and a cheat.