All Comments on 'Lifestyle Ch. 10 - House Party Cont.'

This is a fun and enjoyable story. Love including all the different types of couples and what they like and dislike. Lots of different personalities just like you find at these parties. So was fun to read all the emotions involved. To shelf writing and thanks for your efforts to publish. Cheers

this was awesome!!

I do appreciate your writing, but you have to figure out how to inject some emotion into your characters. The only emotion I felt was dislike for Jan. She may have been sexy, but was also extremely selfish. Making up same room sex rule then breaking the rule not once, but several times. Her husband should have been pissed, but virtually no emotion whatsoever.

WTF ? Either there are rules or not, and he should have been hurt, mad, pissed, ! Nothing !! When you can't identify with a character and never have the same feelings as any of them, the story becomes boring. The plot is a good one, however the execution was lacking. 3-😊😊😊’s for effort