All Comments on 'Lightning Struck Ch. 04'

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Xzy89c1Xzy89c1almost 4 years ago
Bored

The sex got old in second chapter. Mix sex in with obtaining wealth and favors.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Great!

I liked this chapter quite a bit, but I'd also reccomend you throw in a little more than just sex. IE Items, favors, phone #s, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Please continue this series!

I’m really intrigued by where this is all going - please continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please continue this, it's by far the best one I've read. This has so much potential.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great

I keep checking for new chapters. Please continue. Great stuff

mlrsdpicmmlrsdpicmover 3 years ago
Good story

Hope you continue with this, would like to read more of it.

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