All Comments on 'Lights Out Pt. 04'

Would you want to write this?

Gotta love a surprise unexpected twist ending.

Unless they used a foreign object there is literally no physical way for them to have ruptured her colon. Unless they were 24 inches long they couldn't reach it. Bowel tears heal.

he dates a string of lying whores who continue to lie and whore when caught and he refuses to leave them, they all leave him

Are we supposed to feel sorry for this piece of shit and his string of duplicitous cunts?

Can't comment on the story itself. I'm dazed. Feel a little nauseous.

Harrison did nothing wrong, Beth caused all their pain and paid the price.

Harrison should have left Beth from the get-go after finding what she did. Nothing good will come from it just pain.

Four chapters of complete crap.

I do not understand why after a DP she can no longer have sex. For heavens sake a baby’s head is larger in diameter than than even a 12” penis. Torn vaginas occur all the time in childbirth, happened to my wife she nearly bled out with her tear. But they fixed it no problems and her sex life is quite normal. That happened to her with our third son27 years ago and we had a fourth son 22 years ago no problems. Sex life still normal.

Even a torn anus is quite easily repaired. Why a colostomy bag was needed is beyond me?

These medical exaggerations were not explained and were not required or were necessary to the plot. They detracted from the story.

A good story but because of these unexplained medical issues I have downgraded it to a 4/5

Karma for the slut wife!! Glad hubby divorced her...

but your grammar and word usage are really bad. They spoil the story.They make your meaning unclear.

You really need an editor -- even the Word spell and grammar check would help.

This was dumb beyond belief. And, dear God, enlist an editor.

Long time since I have read such a load of crap.

Good story - kept evolving as the plot developed

some of this is unrealistic and not really even plausible..try realism throughout the story not just where it's convenient..JZK

Nothing

Pond scum. Writer name is amazing , prof of what, idiocy?

What a ridiculous load of crap. The story was moronic, the dialogue was horrible, and the rape occurrence was absolutely absurd. Please give us all a break and stop writing unrealistic shit.

Hideous story. The rape was disgusting. Thr husband not even confronting her or checking on her for days was disgusting. And the rape with Reg's small cock would not rupture her anus so completely that she needs a colostomy bag fot life. Or why she can no longer have penetrative vaginal sex? Surgeries can repair any such damage. Dumb ending.

Very good series, when I read the first episode I thought it would end badly, in real life most "fantasy" sex games generally don't end well, which is why sex fantasies should remain such and stay fun.

Good story, the old saying twos company, three is a crowd isn't any less true because it's a cliche, if three is a crowd, 4,5,6 plus is a disaster waiting to happen, in this story it happened.

I wasn't expecting the story to go in this direction, a very poor ending in my opinion.