All Comments on 'Lilith Shorts - The Good Deed'

Loved the story. LBB

Very nice work, thank you.

I know these are shorts but, I would love see more of theses characters and this story line. Thank you for a sexy and fun story.

Read a lot like the start of 'vampires don't sparkle' but less depth to the characters and plot set-up. 'Knight to the throat' was a confusing and funny typo, thought it was a medieval story for a moment. Cheers

It's nice to have you back. Will this be a continued story or just a one off.?

Instead of him calling out the classic STELLA is there a reason her name is ELLA

Great as a start to a bigger story. Lots missing as a stand alone.

Brilliant! Please expand to more supernatural creatures like Fairies like a fairy that gets a crush on a dude and starts pranking and messing with him and putting him in erotic situations before eventually seducing him. It’s pretty in character for fairies in old mythology as they were known as mischievous pranksters.

Great story. Could be the start of a wonderful Ella/Ted storyline.

A true joy to read. You came with something that was touching which is very rare in a vampire tale. Thanks.