All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium - Cock of Koldak Ch. 02'

Heavy stuff, amigo! An excellent read for sure!

A real page-turner! But hard to when my hands are otherwise occupied!

Great!

You say you know your grammar isn't perfect but don't care (you really should). Your grammar isn't just not perfect. It's terrible.

Then why do you keep reading my stories?

Anonymous: Not only reading them but taking the time to comment on how ‘bad’ the grammar is without providing any help or advice. I’m quite strict with grammar and punctuation in my professional life, however these stories are a bit of escapism. I’d read this particular author’s stories even if he refused to use any punctuation! They’re always excellent and I’ve never scored them less than 5 stars. I wish I had a tenth of his talent and imagination. It’s easy to criticise, not so easy to create. If you want to leave criticism then at least provide some examples, advice and help. Also, don’t do it anonymously, that’s a bit of a crappy way of doing it in my opinion.

Thanks Robcoles! People like you are the reason I keep writing.

A person becomes an informant if they lack the ability to be a soldier. Same for a person becoming a critic when they lack the ability to be a creator. In short, try not to criticize if you have nothing of your own to show.

Great story! Thanks for sharing.

Loved this story. Thank you for sharing.