All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium - Date with Lilith Ch. 04'

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jkthekatjkthekatover 4 years ago
I'm the first!

to comment! Ooh Rah! You're stories are wonderful!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Finally

Glad to see you are continuing the lilith/Nessira series, my absolute favorite. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I freaking love your stories.

They're as sexy as they can be wholesome, just like this one, outstanding work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is amazing

I’m liking Lilith more and more as this story goes on, please don’t stop here with her. It would be great to have a full story of her back in her evil years.

MrKnightlyWriterMrKnightlyWriterover 4 years ago
Great story as always but I’m curious

I love the date with Lilith series it alway sweet and nice, but I have a question in this world where hell and demon exist...Is there a heaven? Or angels? Trying to fight and keep order against the demons that run around so freely? Seeing as if heaven and angels existed then they would of tried to stop ness from her old time rampage and would of stop evil queen ness from the alternative world, it just a question really I love the lore of your world and was curious to see if they existed in yours

maestro84maestro84over 4 years agoAuthor
Good question

In this world there is no Heaven or Hell per say, Lilith is the person that the Lilith from the Bible was based off of but there are differences. Demons in this story come from other dimensions and like coming here because humans are delicious (which means different things based on what type of creatures), Sex Demons feed off the act of sex without any harm to the human, Succubi suck out their life force through sex, Fairies feed off semen and so on. There is a dimension similar to hell but you don't go there when you die. Baphomet exists but is not from hell per say. Demons are given a bad reputation because they are sinful but most of them are just looking for love and companionship like we are. I am trying to write a story where a young christian guy meets a sex demon and struggles with what the bible tought him and what she is telling him and try to explain and dive further into this question. Thanks

MrKnightlyWriterMrKnightlyWriterover 4 years ago
Thanks for reply and...really!

Demon from another dimension? holy shit that sounds cool like demons and such were never meant to exist in this world and I always like a sweet stuff with demon wanting to find what we are trying to find I really had no idea...ever though of doing a kinda childhood story between two childhood friend one a female demon from another dimension still young growing up along side a human boy who she get a thing for?...sorry my mind ramble a little your universe gives so many amzaing ideas.

maestro84maestro84over 4 years agoAuthor
Interesting

That is an interesting Idea, maybe I can mix that with the story about the Christian kid, maybe she moves away at some point and they meet again as adults, and he finds out she left because of his religious beliefs thinking he would never accept her for who or what she is, I'll play around with this idea, thanks!

MrKnightlyWriterMrKnightlyWriterover 4 years ago
I’m honoured that you like it

Thanks and it would be interesting in the reveal since they have known each other for so long but I’m a massive fan of your so thanks for liking it...ever though of a demon maid...ok I’ll stop now thanks again I’m hyped to see how this come out I have a weakness for childhood friend stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Are you going to be continuing with this?

Really hope you plan on continuing this saga like you did with Nessira.

I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to know what happens next and how it will end.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
This is an awesome story

I haven't read your other stories yet i stumbled on this one first but it's amazing. I love the relationship between Lilith and Chris. I really hope you continue the story. It's easily one of the top 3 succubus stories I've ever read.

Nat20roller1Nat20roller1almost 4 years ago
Enjoying this series greatly.

Very much like this story, Hope we get another chapter soon! :)

Ravenfan1Ravenfan1over 2 years ago

GREAT, GREAT story!!!

Amazing plot, very erotic, very sensual and very well writen!!!

Thanks, and go on!!!

StrangeShadowStrangeShadowabout 1 year ago

I'm not sure if you still active?

I enjoyed your Lilith story a far better naughty story than Fifty shades.

maestro84maestro84about 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks! Nessira's story is up to it's 21st chapter at this point. I don't write as much as I used to be I plan to do more.

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