All Comments on 'Lillith's Stopwatch Ch. 02'

While nothing is new about succubi, time stopping, and mind control separately; seeing them (and hopefully more topics) together is nice. The flow of the sex seemed a bit rushed in writing, but it is a personally preference of mine to read about the act of sex in greater detail.

I will keep enjoying your stories as they come out.

Dude whackadoodle, get out of the mc world of you don't like mc

Agreed - whackdoodle is well, whakadoodle and clearly does not belong in MC world. Please keep writing, this is a fun take on MC/timestop. The writing and scenes are a little rushed, but overall it is a fun intro into this world and allows the reader to imagine what else they might do if they had such a device.

Keep going!