All Comments on 'Lines Are Crossed at the Beach'

Very good! We are waiting for Ch. 2.

I really enjoyed this story a lot and look forward to reading more from you! Great job!

can't wait for more!!!

A long time ago, but the best time of my life.

Excellent story of a mutual fantasy after a week at a South Carolina beachhouse. Hope there is more to share,

A great story - was wet reading it, made me wish I was part of that trip!!!

Keep writing!

Very horny story. Thank you.

but in the house at the beach.

Three couples enjoying a vacation with lots of fun on the beach until the rain sets in and they quickly get bored with the games at hand.

Well written, alluring and tempting.

Nicely written and a huge turn-on. An original, refreshing rework of the usual wife-swapping stories. More, please!

It's annoying to read.

that is 1 awesome story

Sucking], kissing, and filling all holes with cum is fund to do with couples

What a great and amazing plot. You painted each scene perfectly. Super steamy scene!

Bunch or cheating sluts and cuck husbands...

Awesome story, I could not get all the way through (even on subsequent reads) without a huge orgasm. Wish there were more parts to the story!

Great hot story. Loved Jake jacking off onto Laura's tits. Then in the end you eating Laura's cum filled pussy that is dripping Brad's cum out of it. I can't wait to hear the next chapter. Now that the girls have eaten each other, is it the boys turn. Hard and hopeful here. 😋