All Comments on 'Lines Are Crossed at the Beach'

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JodailyJodaily9 months ago

Great hot story. Loved Jake jacking off onto Laura's tits. Then in the end you eating Laura's cum filled pussy that is dripping Brad's cum out of it. I can't wait to hear the next chapter. Now that the girls have eaten each other, is it the boys turn. Hard and hopeful here. 😋

mikepriveemikepriveeabout 1 year ago

Awesome story, I could not get all the way through (even on subsequent reads) without a huge orgasm. Wish there were more parts to the story!

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Bunch or cheating sluts and cuck husbands...

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Amazing!

What a great and amazing plot. You painted each scene perfectly. Super steamy scene!

AsuedeAsuedeabout 9 years ago
Tasting another Man's cum ffrtom a pussy if as fun as sucking his cock

Sucking], kissing, and filling all holes with cum is fund to do with couples

ohiorobertohiorobertalmost 10 years ago
awesome

that is 1 awesome story

norcal62norcal62over 10 years ago
Don't write a story in present tense.

It's annoying to read.

DSolo61DSolo61almost 11 years ago
Well-written and exciting story!

Nicely written and a huge turn-on. An original, refreshing rework of the usual wife-swapping stories. More, please!

dutchraindutchrainabout 11 years ago
No sex on the beach

but in the house at the beach.

Three couples enjoying a vacation with lots of fun on the beach until the rain sets in and they quickly get bored with the games at hand.

Well written, alluring and tempting.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Excellent

Very horny story. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Fabulous

A great story - was wet reading it, made me wish I was part of that trip!!!

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Mutual Fantasy

Excellent story of a mutual fantasy after a week at a South Carolina beachhouse. Hope there is more to share,

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Brings back memories

A long time ago, but the best time of my life.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
excellent start....

can't wait for more!!!

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyalmost 12 years ago
Very very yummy

I really enjoyed this story a lot and look forward to reading more from you! Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Very good! We are waiting for Ch. 2.

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