by Ashson
Enjoyed your story very much. Oh how it would be to be in that position!
gave 5 stars really great story, must add second part with this couple again. perhaps another outing. awesome read it again
One little idea made funny with wit. Shakespeare on the back of an envelope, sitting on the lou.
This Ashson has a zany sense of humor that is sooooooo British. There is a Monty Python touch to his neat little short stories, where all characters adhere to rigid roles of sheer nonsense, either defending or attacking nonsense, and when sex is the motivation the scenes are hilarious. Ashson is indespensible to LW.
but if he wasn't dehabilitated in those ways, he might have written a sardonic & entertaining tale like this one.
NEWSFLASH: That pretty much covers ANY non-fiction piece, so by your reasoning ANY criticism of ANY story's believability, logic, etc. is forbidden.
Fairly fast from a nipple poking out to Poochy Poontang Poking. But Ashson is the Henny Youngman of LIT. So...I'm going to believe that our Pescatorial Hero made Sweetie think she was getting drilled with a barracuda.
I suspect Sweetie will decide that water-reflected sun rays are far superior to any others, and will become a regular member of the fishing team!
5*
Too many people are constantly fact checking and denouncing stories as unbelievable.
NEWSFLASH.
These stories are fiction. The story is about Eddy and Faye and a sexual adventure. This is not a fishing story. This is not a fishing site.
I liked the story. I liked that Eddy seduced Faye not with booze or an arm-sized member but with his mind, his words.
I do know how 'big' garfish are.
I also know you won't get barracuda in a school.
The character was being a little sarcastic.
Do some research please. Flathead and bream and garfish in the same 200 metres