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She handed me a coffee, which was much appreciated, and then sat down next to me and snuggled in and yawned.
"If you fall asleep here, I'll just leave you. Maybe pin a note on you saying where they can return you to," I said.
She took her head off my shoulder long enough to lick her tongue out at me, and then snuggle right back in. My threats were meaningless.
"Daddy," she said in a sleepy voice. "This was a really good vacation. Thank you for taking me."
And that day, the Grinch's small heart grew three sizes, I thought to myself.
"You're very welcome, princess. Thanks for being such a good little girl on vacation."
I could practically feel the smile against my arm.
"I love you, Daddy."
"I love you too, princess."
She giggled softly "I'm a Disney princess now," and I reached down and kissed her head, saying yes she was.
Despite a solid effort on my part in trying to ruin things it really had gone well. Not many couples spend five nights here and only have one, moderate-level fight. Just as illuminating was finding out that we were at the point where it sounds like she would seriously consider it if I proposed to her.
It was insane, of course. We didn't have six months together yet. She still had two years of school left. And I'm not entirely sure she fully understood the commitment involved with marriage. Then again, kids whose parents are divorced don't tend to joke or take marriage lightly.
I took a sip of my coffee, letting it burn its way down a bit. I looked back at Kitten, who had actually managed to fall back asleep. I shook my head and smiled.
There was no rush. Not yet. But getting married to her didn't seem as remote or far off as it did a week ago.
A woman at the gate desk took that moment to announce boarding by zone was now beginning. I shook Kitten who grumbled, but sat up.
"Come on, Kitten. Let's go home."
- COMMENTS
Taid76923 months agoAnother great episode, although I think that I am going to have to vacuum this room more often the dust in the air made my eyes water!
CreativeEdgeralmost 2 years agoI have really enjoyed the skills you have employed to entertain up to this point - it's a very good narrative. But I was seriously surprised at the cavalier treatment of "conspiracy theorists" handed out by a minor character on page 4. I understand that the "official information" that is distributed may well have changed since this was written, but seriously - you think DOCTORS were wise and compassionate during this disaster? They killed more than their usual share, which the AMA says is mostly "3rd leading CAUSE of death!"
Did you know that "conspiracy theorists" was a phrase coined by the CIA's paid expert manipulators to cause public perception of legitimate concerns regarding the assassination of JFK to be "blown off?" And even conventional medical organizations are now acknowledging that ALL of "counter measures" actually caused MORE HARM? With exactly ZERO benefits for anyone, especially children!
So, I may have to take a break from this series, because I know how much harm is being done by the kind of thinking demonstrated here. And I can only handle just so much, and there are other stories I can be reading.
Anonymousover 2 years agoI am hooked, intrigued and a host of other adjectives and adverbs. This story is enchanting and I love it more with each passing chapter. Thank you for sharing.
GaiusPetroniusover 2 years agoI have followed 5 episodes and have every intention to stick with you to the end. I have refrained from joining the chorus of those singing your praises, until now. Let me preface my comments by taking exception to something you wrote in your introduction to the 2nd installment: "Because we all know how important accuracy is in pornography." Without belaboring the point, let me note that in my lexicon there is a huge difference between porn and erotica. (After all, this site is called Literotica, which is not to say that there's a dearth of porn on Literotica.) Erotica has a long and honorable place in the history of literature. What you have written in this series is erotica.
I deeply appreciate three elements of this Chapter 06:
1. Your skewering analysis of Disney World's business model (pg 1: "Disney is designed to make you buy things everywhere you look.") is both amusing and brilliant -- and salient.
2. The Anna episode (pg 5) is poignant, shows amazing depth of thought.
3. Also deeply penetrating from a psychological and intellectual standpoint is the misunderstanding between Ben and Kit over her planning responsibilities. Ben planted the seed with his innocent comment that vacations test the solidity of many relationships. Ben, having absorbed all the financial aspects, left Kit to plan the itinerary because he wanted to give the two of them a fresh experience untainted by the recollections of his previous visits. Kit took "test" in the more commonplace sense, as way of measuring her worth. There could hardly be a better depiction of honest miscommunication!
Just for good measure, I'll add that you show in numerous and lovely small ways what makes Canadians the basically decent people they are.
Thank you for creating the universe of Ben/Daddy and Ashley/Kit. 5 stars all the way!
postoak2020about 3 years agoGreat story, well written. Love the use of flash backs to explain the current situation
Wonderful character interplay and the widow at Disney talking about her experience was a master stroke. Looking forward to the next chapter
Anonymousabout 3 years agoJust awesome... well written with feelings and just the right tone! Shows how much work and presence you need to invest in a relationship... Pleeaaaase keep writing this story!!!!👍👍👍👍👍
