by Mericalovess
What’s with the pronouns? Using they/their instead of him/her is just plain confusing and wrong. No matter what the woke idiots say, Kris is a he or a she. What he/she wants to call herself or ‘identify as’ is irrelevant. Virtually unreadable, I stopped after the first few times.
Sorry, I couldn't get past the use of "they, their, or them" when referring to an individual. That alone caused the story to not read well for me.
Suffered to the WTF end
Can't give a low enough point for all and more reasons as other comments!!!
Nicely done. OK the use of ‘they’ makes it harder to follow, though mostly because we’re not used to it, but it’s good that you’ve taken up the challenge. Pity the commentators found it too hard - perhaps a sentence to explain is needed for the moment, though I guess that spoils the point. Thanks.