All Comments on 'Liv Morgan Learns to Top Ch. 02'

Good work. Improvement over the last time, but as others pointed out, I think you can be more clear about who's talking. Also, more detail would be good on exactly what they're doing. Maybe have a few paragraphs on their thoughts and feelings about all this, reflecting on their past, etc. Anyway, looking forward to more.

I see some improvements from chapter 1- I like to see that! Just keep working on the speaker component. While it can get boring typing '"Blah blah blah," Alexa said' over and over, it's still essential for a good story. I like the cliffhanger at the end, and I'd like just a bit more detail to really get the reader engaged.