All Comments on 'Living Arrangements Ch. 02'

Good job.. >.>

That was fucking awesome Red! Since the Ravens are doing so well, seems you ottaa take some more time and tell us more about Amry and Patrick's living arrangements.

Very well written. I didn't notice any gramatical errors. I really like how you have Amy being so damn eager to please Patrick while he's trying to take advantage of his good fortune without being too cruel. What will Amy's role be when Patrick has the guys over for the game this Sunday?

I really like the development of the story with each of the characters becoming better at their respective roles.