by ExpandingUniverse
Holy shit. Was so invested in the story. You're really great at writing characters. And loved how natural all of the sneaking around felt.
I can hardly believe Victoria left because she wanted to fuck around, and not because she caught him cheating. But maybe she was just pretending.
I like this story so far, but I would greatly hate it if Victoria comes back after whoring around and she realizes there is no guy like him and now she wants to get back together and he accepts her
Dont get how people think this is a great story.
The characters are more retarded in the head than everything.