All Comments on 'Lockdown with Victoria and Angie Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
keep on going

seriously good! keep on going with this series!

tz11138tz11138over 3 years ago
If you tag pregnancy add it.

Expand on the story and add some to it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Holy shit. Was so invested in the story. You're really great at writing characters. And loved how natural all of the sneaking around felt.

BeneTleilaxBeneTleilaxabout 2 years ago

I can hardly believe Victoria left because she wanted to fuck around, and not because she caught him cheating. But maybe she was just pretending.

Evil_MonarchEvil_Monarchalmost 2 years ago

I like this story so far, but I would greatly hate it if Victoria comes back after whoring around and she realizes there is no guy like him and now she wants to get back together and he accepts her

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Dont get how people think this is a great story.

The characters are more retarded in the head than everything.

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I've always enjoyed writing, and recently I also started creating visual novel games with similar themes to the stories written here. If you enjoyed my stories, I recommend checking out my games Hypnosis and Endowed for free at www.expandinguniversegames.com Cheers!