All Comments on 'Look What I Found, Daddy Ch. 02'

Called it. I knew he would nail Sara. Now Beth, ( you called her Ellen several times, you should watch that), needs to change tactics, and say, "fuck it, if the little little sluts want to fuck dad fine", "but I'm getting mine too, so they have to eat my pussy if they're going to fuck my husband". 5/5 stars

Dewey Cheatham

All a bit confused and names mixed up.

Beth \ Ellen ??!!!! makeup mind ??!!!! ??!!!! ??!!!!

what makes even worse / what makes even dumber - first chapter it wasn't even week ago yet

( zero reasoning unable remember those names you've made ) ............................

everything else became excellent . everything else became awesome

re: Beth vs Ellen

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If you are so disinterested in your own story you can't keep the names straight, why should anyone else have an interest in it? How can someone vote this 5/5 after such a fuck up? What's the criteria for a 5, just existing? A 5 should be used rarely.

Sarah lied. Ellen and Beth. The fuck is the point of any of this? And with the other anon, still no description. and no fucking reasons either. Go fuck your ego somewhere else.

Hello, I'm the author. I have to apologize, I am new to this. This is my third story. There is a continuity error in the name, I wish I could say that I uploaded the wrong draft, but it just got away from me. I will do better in the future. I don't know how to fix this, if someone knows how to remove a story or edit once published please send private feedback.

I appreciate all of your feedback, keep it coming so I can get better at this.

Jimmy (and my ego)

Not half bad story. Just do some editing and proofreading before submitting your stories. Also Interested in what's next for the family.

That was the best face fuck description I've ever read. Hats off to you