All Comments on 'Loosening Up Bk. 08 Ch. 21-25'

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SteveWallaceSteveWallaceabout 4 years agoAuthor
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A reminder to readers: a PDF document listing the characters and some other information about the Circle is available upon request by email to me at romantically12@aol.com.

tkh3nkey2110tkh3nkey2110about 4 years ago
A nice change of direction

I liked following a week in the life of Alice. It is a nice departure from following Dave all of the time. I think it would be neat to see this treatment done with some of the other Circle members. It might give some of the more important characters more depth. Good work. Thanks for writing. A 5 Star Rating.

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A note on the story Loosening Up: Yes, it has many many characters. A PDF is available upon request listing the characters and placing them in some kind of perspective for the reader. Just email me (see below). Well over 18 ... even 30, hell 40 is way back there, oh hell, o...

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