All Comments on 'LOP Quickies Ch. 06'

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ipreferoral 28 days ago

Well-written. Sexy. Interesting characters and interactions. Maybe change “rag” to “cloth” - something my wife advised to me.

red_gonzo 28 days agoAuthor

Nice suggestion. And that does make more sense. Also 'towel' 'wash cloth' will also work. Thanks!

Kernflakes 28 days ago

Still loving these little shorts, but can't wait till the next full installment. Hope you are having a a great month!

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April 30 - Since some have asked in comments and in messages, the next LoP chapter is in the works. It is currently nearly 14,000 words, and much of that is still just outline, so still lots to finish about it. I appreciate the continued patience as I work out the story detail...

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