Lorinda's Surprise

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Rindy asked, "Head home?"

Wendy smiled and looked at me. "You didn't tell them about me did you?"

"I was getting around to it in my own way."

"Yeah sure you were. Jim and I share an apartment, he sleeps on the couch." Rindy looked at Patty and I saw the look of sadness in Rindy's eyes. We said good bye to everyone and I gave hugs to everyone but Rindy. When we got in Wendy's car she asked, "So how'd I do? You think they bought the 'sleeping on the couch' line?"

"Of course not. Patty had used that with her boyfriend Trace after her divorce from her husband. It took her almost a year to admit they were involved. You did a great job, thank you." When we got to the complex I said, "I will see you for dinner tomorrow night, where do I take you for your help tonight?"

"We'll figure it out tomorrow, see how I'm feeling, good night Jim."

"Good night Wendy." The next party Wendy had already agreed that she and I will go together so that Rindy will definitely understand I don't need or want her any longer. I don't know that Wendy and I will ever be more than 'just friends' but we have been spending a lot of time together when she isn't at work. Who knows if I could keep her happy since I couldn't keep Rindy happy I'm a little shy of making a commitment again.


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27 Comments
MightyheartMightyheart3 months ago

Poor end. No justice.

1/5

tangoperutangoperuover 2 years ago

A doctor fucking a patient? I'm sure the Ethics Council (or equivalent) would be quite interested in this. He was a wimp and will die a wimp.

ScorpioJJScorpioJJover 2 years ago

Depressing. He just walks away but the three brothers get no payback? So many ways he could have taken them down. Another wimpy husband who doesn't punish the bad guys but self punishes at the expense of any future happiness and his relationship with his grandkids.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyover 2 years ago

Very disconnected. How could she think he’d accept what she did. Nothing in background to give any indication. Then the end felt very incomplete.

nixroxnixroxalmost 3 years ago

1 star - bad idea

SunnyU2SunnyU2almost 3 years ago

he should have them all arrested for kidnapping..including his wife

onbothsidesonbothsidesalmost 3 years ago

Um, no official complaint about the predictor doctor? You know, maybe warn future victims? A doctor who approved the idea of tying up a 69 year old man with circulatory issues?

Are there any children younger than 35? Just wondering

ScorpioJJScorpioJJalmost 3 years ago

No payback for the Brothers? They should have mysteriously disappeared one by one.

WillowghbyWillowghbyover 3 years ago
Cartoonish

Both plot and characters are cartoon like. Rindy waits 35 years to spring the truth on hubby, then does it with non-consensual restraint - not likely. Jim has a sleazy slut for a wife and doesn't suspect - strains credibility. Three married brothers, one an MD, participate in illegal restraint and gangbang - hard to believe. Rindy sleeps and leaves Jim tied to a chair for over 5 hours, then expects him to accept her "new" schedule of multi-partner fornication - really?!!

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I see three non-exclusive possibilities: either the author is really stupid, the author thinks his readers are really stupid, or the readers are really stupid. Don't care which are true, I am personally insulted to have this kind of effort delivered. "Bsure" to get yourself a full service editor! Thanks for the incomplete effort, this really needs major reconstruction.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 3 years ago

Maybe I missed something, but I thought he got upset when Lorinda restrained him and fucked Mark, Roger and Greg in front of him, and had been cheating on him for years!

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