by lit_vgn
Or the get any real detail of what the enemy really looks like. A Borg,Cyberman, Drialek or what. The sex scenes were nicely detailed though.
Maybe it's just me. but this seemed a little rushed. I think you could have taken more time to explain things a little better. While the orders given may have made sense militarily, they did not make sense to the story other than to give the character reactions a type of motivation. Take your time--we may not wait patiently, but we will wait.
JimDinMN