All Comments on 'Losing Battles'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Can't See the White of Their Eyes

Or the get any real detail of what the enemy really looks like. A Borg,Cyberman, Drialek or what. The sex scenes were nicely detailed though.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Okay--

Maybe it's just me. but this seemed a little rushed. I think you could have taken more time to explain things a little better. While the orders given may have made sense militarily, they did not make sense to the story other than to give the character reactions a type of motivation. Take your time--we may not wait patiently, but we will wait.

JimDinMN

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