All Comments on 'Losing Battles'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Okay--

Maybe it's just me. but this seemed a little rushed. I think you could have taken more time to explain things a little better. While the orders given may have made sense militarily, they did not make sense to the story other than to give the character reactions a type of motivation. Take your time--we may not wait patiently, but we will wait.

JimDinMN

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Can't See the White of Their Eyes

Or the get any real detail of what the enemy really looks like. A Borg,Cyberman, Drialek or what. The sex scenes were nicely detailed though.

Anonymous
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