All Comments on 'Losing Control Feels Good Pt. 03'

Your writing is still amazing, but the threesome didn't do it for me. The sex was good and a little over the top. The females together didn't have the same energy as Sam with the two of them. Still, an intriguing story that leaves the reader hanging with Sam's last thought. I believe that is a lead into Chapter Four. There are a number of ways you could take this story, and I believe I'm not going to like any way that you go. This is your story so go with the flow.