All Comments on 'Losing Your Title Pt. 06'

A guy would beat the shit out of a woman. A trained fighter would damn near kill her.

Part 6 is well written like the other 5 parts well done and looking forward to seeing how it ends

Thank you! It was a little challenging figuring out how to write at any length about the rest of the people in the arena, and not just our two main characters, so I appreciate the comment. Last part should be done soon. Mostly done writing, just have to fill out one piece, and give everything a couple final edits. Thanks for reading!

Your welcome and no rush and despite the difficulties of writing the crowd you did an amazing job

This was such as well written scene. My favourite scene in this story. I can't wait to read what happens next.

Thanks! I am so glad you liked it! I have the last part mostly done! I am still fleshing out one or two small scenes, and then everything needs a couple more rounds of edits and read throughs. Mostly I haven't had time to write, but I will! I am excited to share the last part!

They try that and they instantly losing… Men aren’t into that, we’d rather win than bow to some random female(most of us)