All Comments on 'Loss Time'

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MaydaypilotMaydaypilotover 2 years ago

Wonderfully imagined, masterfully written 5 star erotica!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Nicely put together with a good flow. The theme isn’t new, but I doubt there’s anything that is. Grammar and spelling were fine (apart from Literotica!!). All in all a good first story, and I hope you keep going.

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