by LaceyDresser
Thank you both, and I hope you won't be disappointed in the second half, which I'll be publishing soon.
Welcome back to my favorite and best author on Literotica. You never fail to amaze and arouse me me with your brilliant stories. I would have made this a private message but wanted more to share it with the world. Reply if you wish. One minor concern I had was I sometime had difficulty following who was speaking you or Nancy but that could have just been me. I will be watching daily for the next chapter.
Thank you jtukee, and for the constructive feedback. I've had the same problem with other people's stories here on literotica, and I'm not sure how to solve it. I hate to use the she said, he said scenario over and over (with their names of course), and will have to give it some thought. I hope you are well.