by LucysFox
I am glad you are feeling better Lucy. This is an unusual and wonderful story! The doubts, frustations, and guilt being slowly turned into desire is a wonderful read. Thank You!
The main character is in most ways a bitch. These stories tend to be a lot better if they fight most of the way, even if they inevitably lose. I believe ALOT more disobedience would get them farther.
I enjoy the blend of innocence and eroticism that is blended throughout the story. The insight into the protagonist's thoughts and feelings is quite well done. The battle of shame is something that strikes a chord with me. Please continue this lovely story as I have grown fond of it and am eager to read what happens next.