by fantasea69
The usual way too gay idiocy thats required in every homosexual based Indian story.
I thought American GOP cucks had pathetically weak men but there is a DNA level issue with these garbage creating repressed kids.
Your stories are underrated. I hope I can see more of your work. I really love the "old man" genre in your story.
Please post the next part of the story ASAP. Don't let the negative comments demotivate you.
Hi everyone! I understand the anticipation for the next part. However, the feedback on this series hasn't been that well, even though I put all my time and effort into it to craft a love story mixed with suspense and erotica. So, I hope you do get my reluctance to write the next chapter.
Thank you to all who are patiently waiting and those who have supported my hardwork. I will write the next chapter but give me some time to come up with something more concrete. Meanwhile, the people who didn't like this story, it would be great if you can point out what went wrong, so I can put some fire in your balls as well.
One of the best Indian stories of all time, it has infinite potential. Plz don't let negative comments affect your writing in any way.
I'm surprised there are people who didn't like this story. This story is one of my favorites on this site. I'm so curious what the ending awaits after this.
Well, It may not match other people's tastes, but just my personal delusions:
I'm curious to see how Ruhani and Prem Kumar live as a happy couple, but I'd also like to see more “darker” development.
When Ruhani learns that Prem Kumar has lied about Gaurav being dead, what about Ruhani trying to escape with Gaurav but being stopped by Prem Kumar? I would love to see Prem Kumar using the blockade of the town as an excuse to reveal his patriarchal and dominant true colors. And I want to see Ruhani, initially rebellious, afraid of her husband's true colors, succumbing to Prem Kumar's sexual power and mental domination, more and more becoming “addicted” to Prem Kumar's sex and clinging to it.
Perhaps, even after the blockade of the village is lifted and the family comes to visit, she will already be mentally enslaved and will suffer forever without being able to leave herself.
I want to see Gaurav succumb too, unable to leave the village. He loves Ruhani, but he can't take her away from her husband and can’t return to the splendid life of civilized society either. How about Gaurav as a “cuckold”, ridiculed by the town, and even becomes the village's low-class slave, increasingly powerless at Prem Kumar's control?
(Personally, I think a gender change or gay setting would be also fun, but I don't think it's the your taste…)