by fantasea69
WOW! What an ending. Thank you so much for giving us this incredible tale.
Seriously this is the definition of non-erotic storytelling. Nothing erotic about this story. Not sure why this is even on this site.
Love your stories. They aren't mass crowd pleasers so don't worry about the stars. A lot of cheating stories have lowers stars. Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much for the update author. I really like your cheating old man vibes story. Hope you write more amazing stories like this. Thank you
Another amazing story. Hope to continue writing this kind of stories. I like the village old man and city girl kind of theme. Thank you very much
Please write another story. I am a big fan of your work. I will be waiting for another amazing story. Thank you and godbless
I really like the old village guy and a city girl theme of the story. What makes it more fascinating to read is you the girl is slowly likes the old the guy. Thank you for another story Author . God Bless.
I really like the old village guy and a city girl theme of the story. What makes it more fascinating to read is you the girl is slowly likes the old the guy. Thank you for another story Author . God Bless.
I really like the old village guy and a city girl theme of the story. What makes it more fascinating to read is you the girl is slowly likes the old the guy. Thank you for another story Author . God Bless.
Wow! Amazing story. Great writing skills... Roohani is a real slut but a keeper... Love it
It is an honor for me that my idea inspired you. Even though I'm a gay South Korean male, not an Indian woman, whenever I read the story of women being conquered by old, dominant, hairy South Asian men, I get emotional and excited as if I were the conquered woman. While reading this novel, I enjoyed a really satisfying journey, with some empathy, some as if I were Ruhani, and some as if I were Gaurav. Thank you again for your wonderful novel.
Amazing story bro!! You may be focusing on another series as of now but I would love if you continue this series. For example another hot girl that falls for the old man and ends up being his second wife would be extremely thrilling!!