All Comments on 'Lost Phone Ch. 04'
by flictus
- 10 Comments
300bowler300about 5 years agoSTORY JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER, CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT THE OTHER THINGS ARE, THAT THE DOCTOR IS GOING TO DO, TO HER... BETTY jo xoxo
Anonymousabout 5 years agoA mostly good and a fun read, except I think F-cups are ridiculous, A nice pair of C's or D's look great and normal on a woman, and are more than enough to look, feel, and BE sexy. People who transition want to look generally normal in order to function in a workplace other then stripper bars. But I look forward to reading more of this story :)
Anonymousabout 5 years agoJust read the first four chapters.... the plot thickens, looking forward to many more, thank you for writing
Anonymousabout 5 years agoI am waiting with baited breath for the next chapter, I love this story
GrrrreatImaginationabout 5 years agoI like all 4 chapters of this story. The plot thickens as the chapter numbers increase, which adds depth to the story. As I'm writing this, I realize that the tension tends to be higher in the earlier chapters. Not only the sexual tension.
I can't help but think that Steve is behind the wife's nonchalance. And I'm suspicious that more will change in Brazil that just the makeover. Mmmm, I hope it's juicy.
liz33ndalmost 5 years agokeep it real, even tho its only been three days and wifey is leaving, and so is hubby, as in transitioning
