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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
SPELL CHECK

Is good if the word isn't another word with different spelling. That forgives alter into change something. An altar is religious. What are tense pink nipples? It's masturbate not masturbate. Other than those a marginally interesting story.

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I have started to write erotic stories based on my past, my present and my fantasies. I have always loved the written word and was given English Lit as a nickname by an ex-boyfriend.

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