All Comments on 'Love Bites Ch. 08'

by Lioness_Queen

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redlion75redlion75over 10 years ago

why 2 short chapters in a row? both could have been in the same one.

biercebierceover 10 years ago
welcome back

Great story.So glad you are continuing the story. Please continue.

Littlecat76Littlecat76over 10 years ago
Possibilities

This could be a really good story but it jumps all over the place, changing spelling of names is confusing and if you have incorporated chap 1-6 in one entry now get the singular chapters removed

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

U get a 5 coz she shifted, I'm so happy for her awwwwww

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