All Comments on 'Love in a Changed World Ch. 10'

by Pfog001

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MetaBobMetaBobalmost 2 years ago

This is turning into a remarkably sympathetic story. Still firmly based on a changed world where women have become physically and mentally vastly superior to men, but at least in Simon's case, truly cared for by his woman/women. "Love in a Changed World" indeed. Well done! I gotta say, though ... you could use a good copy editor; I don't even know what the final sentence of this chapter means: "How did they get to past Pudge?"

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