by Calia
Difficult TO read WITH so MANY words IN all-CAPS.
Yes, I see your point. My goal was to use as many Evony terms as I possibly could in the story. I feel it would have lessened its impact had the same terms been used over and over. Thanks for taking the time to give me feedback!
this story would have been a very good read if u hadnt used so many different and confusing terms for the same things. it was annoying to read but the idea of the story is good.